Short, to the point. Perhaps poetic…perhaps…
Mostly for the Jesus part and less about the weeping.
See…not that interesting. Here the tears overshadow the man.
And no one is turning the page.
Jesus probably did a lot of things (assuming he did any at all)
But, “Jesus threw a blanket on the back of a donkey, got a boost from Thomas, hopped up, and rode off into the sunset” is far to mouthy. Even if he was weeping the entire time.
That’s how I would tell the story if I were a first century writer pretending to know him.
“Keep it vague”, I would say to myself, “let the reader decide why”. But I don’t know him.
And won’t pretend as such.